A Beautiful Piece of Art

When asked, she smiles and says,

“I’m okay, thank you, good day”.

Half moon circles adorn her wrist,

hidden under the long sleeves of her tees.

Dark circles under her eyes,

concealed by a lavish amount of make up.

Pain in her smile

disguised into beautiful words.

Emptiness in her heart

veiled through a beautiful piece of art.

When asked, she smiles and says,

“I’m okay, thank you, good day”.

P.S.-

What did you think of this poem? Did you find it relatable? What does it make you feel like? Share your thoughts below in the comment section!

30 Comments Add yours

  1. Unfortunately, it’s a reality but many. Hauntingly beautiful, Sonali ❤️💔

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    1. Sonali says:

      It is indeed. Thank you ♥

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Ace says:

    Such a beautifully written piece, my friend. You captured the emotion so powerfully 🤗🖤

    Like

  3. vaniheart says:

    Ahaaa such a relatable one

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  4. Hidden depression happens all to often. Brilliantly written, Sonali. Loved it!❤️

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you! ♥♥

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  5. akshita1776 says:

    That’s just WOW. I am speechless

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    1. Sonali says:

      I’m so glad that you liked this! Thank you ♥♥

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  6. Very few people are able to smile through that pain. It takes immense courage. Beautifully written Sonali ❤️

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    1. Sonali says:

      I agree and thank you! ♥♥

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  7. AB says:

    So beautifully written Sonali. I got lost while reading this and I sure as hell don’t know what to comment. You did your magic ❤❤

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sonali says:

      You flatter me. Thank you so much! ♥♥

      Liked by 1 person

      1. AB says:

        ❤️❤️

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  8. Filarance says:

    Woww..! So emotional piece dear..! Very beautifully written..!🤗

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you so much! Glad you liked it ♥

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      1. Filarance says:

        Most welcome dear Sonali..!

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  9. Just a poignant piece of work

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you ♥

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thanks ♥

      Like

  10. This poem was very sad, I really liked it though. It’s true that a lot of people dress themselves up in smiles and positivity but on the inside can be deeply hurting. I found this to be a very honest reflection of reality. Thank you for sharing ❤

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    1. Sonali says:

      Being honest was the goal. Thank you so much for taking the time to appreciate this poem ♥♥

      Liked by 1 person

  11. Jokerswild says:

    The wavelength between us is not so far apart lovely, as I read this… I went back and read my older post “Real eye realize Real lies” and we think so much alike in a way. It’s so easy to cover pain with a robotic response to a typical question such as “ How are you?” There’s so much more underneath the painting that people don’t know, some don’t know the sacrifice behind the smile or the hardships behind the “hellos”. If people only knew the beauty behind the art, they would appreciate it more and care if it was really okay. What a masterpiece.♥️♥️

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    1. Sonali says:

      Very well put Roy and thank you so much once again for getting me like no one else can ♥♥

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Jokerswild says:

        You are the color vibrant in a box of crayons lovely!🌹. I should be thanking you♥️♥️

        Like

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