These slowed reverb songs
torment me with this space
that lies between you and me.
Didn’t think it was possible
for me to open my heart again,
but to you, I just can’t seem to close it.
Moments I crave for,
your presence I seek for,
your smile I’m breathless for.
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What did you think of this poem? Did it remind you of someone? Made you feel something? Share your thoughts below!
I love this piece, Sonali. The last three lines were especially beautiful. Amazingly done as always, my friend 🖤🤗
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Thank you! Glad you liked it ♥
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So beautifully written.. Love is the remedy for exhausted souls.. Keep writing.. Keep giving 😍🌷😊
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Thank you and that’s very true. ♥♥
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So heartfelt and beautiful, Sonali. Love it!❤️
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Thanks! ♥♥
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Very welcome.💕
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I do hope you make that longed for connection soon.
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So full of passion, enough to make one’s heart skip a beat. Beautiful lines Sonali, loved it so much ❤️❤️
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Thank you! You’re always too kind to me ♥♥
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You’re so welcome ❤❤
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Like they say, “A heart must first be broken in order to be opened”. Once a heart is opened, it allows love to come in and it’s a beautiful thing for the person it’s allowing to accept. The giver must have a kindred soul, a beautiful soul and that heart has so much to give. This poem is about a heart like that and a giver of that potential, and not being able to close a heart isn’t a bad thing because it just means one is always open to new beginnings. This is a beautiful poem lovely♥️♥️. Let your heart be your guide and on another note….I know you don’t like these kind of things but feelings come into play😉. Happy Birthday lovely, may your wishes come true♥️♥️🌹
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What can I say? You get me! ♥♥
Oh my God! How did you know?!! Thank you so so much! ♥♥
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Yes lovely, we get each other♥️♥️
What can I say, my eyes light up to things that interest me. I pay attention to when the sun comes up😉🌹. I’m a Cancer too. You are so very welcome, have a Happy one.♥️🎂
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Oh, that’s great! Thank you so much once again, really means a lot to me ♥♥
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Very welcome🌹🌹
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You’re poems always make me feel something, dear Sonali. Poignant, elegant, and beautiful verse, my friend. ❤❤
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I’m glad that they have such an influence. Thank you so much Jeff, really means a lot ♥♥
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You’re welcome, Sonali. Always. ❤️❤️
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Life and love leave us breathless
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Very true ♥
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Such a lovely poem, Sonali. You’ve portrayed the longing so well
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Thank you! ♥♥
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You’re very welcome ❤️😊
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This is lovely Sonali. All your poems are very relatable. Like instances from our daily life. Pleasing to read 🙂
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I’m glad you find them so relatable. Thank you ♥♥
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This poem is so wonderful! You perfectly captured the beginning of a new love, when you thought that you could never have such feelings for a person again, because the last one may have hurt you. I think opening your heart again is always linked to risks, especially because we make ourselves vulnerable again. But if it’s the right one, taking risks will be worth it
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Thank you and yes, some risks are just worth it ♥♥
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The heart is the hardest thing to close, I think.
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Agreed ♥
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Nice.
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So my dear..! I loved it very much..! Your writings are really awesome..!
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Thank you! You’re too sweet ♥♥
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Aw…. You’re very welcome dear. It’s my pleasure..!
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Have a blessed day ♥♥
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Have a wonderful day my dear..!
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Loved it
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I can only hope to one day love someone as deeply as this. To go from – never thinking that their heart would open again to now not being able to close it is an amazing leap, whoever they are dating must be an incredible person.
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He sure is. And I hope that for you too. Lots of love ♥♥
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