Remember that day when you hugged me for the very first time?
I kept on wishing for the time to stop in that moment,
and for you to never let me go.
Remember the first time we stayed up all night just to talk to each other?
I was already exhausted and my eyes were droopy,
but I didn’t want to risk losing that moment with you.
Remember when I told you that I relate most to Bluntschli ’cause he’s a romantic?
I was so ecstatic when I saw your eyes light up with genuine interest
in everything and anything that I was going to say.
Remember when I told you that I wished something from a shooting star?
I wished for something to cherish after we leave our sweet little bubble,
I wished for moments with you before you leave.
P.S.-
Captain Bluntschli is a character from the play, ‘Arms and The Man’ by George Bernard Shaw.
How did you like this poem? Share your thoughts below in the comment section!
Such a sweet, nostalgic and heartfelt poem! Beautifully written, Sonali. I absolutely love it and the flow is so stunning!! Well done 🖤🤗
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Thank you!♥♥
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Oh the love is so heartfelt. ❤️❤️ Beautiful writing dear Sonali 🤗🤗
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Thank you so much!♥♥
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Absolutely beautiful, Sonali.❤️
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Thank you!! ♥♥
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My pleasure.❤️
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This is so sweet 💗 💖
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Glad you liked it ♥♥
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Sweet and so full of heart. I felt every word of it, all the moments, like they were my own. Loved it so so so much ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much! Very glad you liked it so ♥♥
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You’re welcome! You have a lovely day ❤❤
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You too ♥♥
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Lovely, sweet n heartfelt poem ✨❤️
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Thank you so much! ♥♥
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You’re welcome ✨ ❤️
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You depict the longing so beautifully every time. May you get all love that you so deserve 💕
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Thank you so much my friend. Really appreciate it ♥♥
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My absolute pleasure. Stay gorgeous 💕
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You too ♥♥
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Such is love. This is so heartfelt, Sonali. We always crave for more time with our special one. Such a sweet poem. I loved it 😍
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Thank you! I’m so glad that you liked this poem.♥♥
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Always a pleasure ❤️🤗
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Beautiful, Sonali.❤️❤️
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Thank you Jeff! ♥
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You’re welcome, Sonali! 🤗❤
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Very touching and sad
Why should just this person suffer always.
Just food for thought!
I know it’s romantic poetry and that is how it is!
Well penned Sonali.
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Well some sufferings are just worth it.
Thank you for taking the time to read it. Really means a lot ♥♥
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Hmm….Sufferings are worth suffering!
And some wisdom!
Thank you Sonali
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Beautiful! I am so jealous of your romantic poems! You write them with so much ease.
And is it any surprise that your eyes were feeling droopy after having biryani? 😈
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I’m flattered, thank you so much! ♥♥
Haha no, but the incident I’m referring to in this poem happened last year when we were just becoming friends.
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Ah ha. So this is the secret you were trying not to reveal 😛
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XD
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Oh so touching!🖤
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Thank you ♥♥
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Nice.
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Thank you ♥♥
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The poem is a lovely ode to those moments
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked it ♥
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Woww..! Such a heart warming piece..! So lovely.!🤗
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Thank you! Glad you liked it ♥♥
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Most welcome dear Sonali..!
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☺️😊
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One moment in time becomes a lifetime, you make a hug seem like an eternal embrace and phone conversations can last forever cause time does stand still. You put memories and moments in to this poem that stops time lovely and slows the heart to a loving beat. And of course you could relate to a character that could win the heart of a woman who was simply hiding him from circumstance.🌹. You too are a romantic heart and your poetic words capture every minute of it.♥️
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Thank you so much Roy! Your comments are always so sweet and poetic ♥♥
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As are your poems lovely🌹🌹
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This gave me goose-bumps, so beautifully written💓
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I’m seriously honored. Thank you ♥♥
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