Colors blur and I can’t make one out from other,
images pass through my mind of moments past,
words mix and all I can hear is madness.
I’m trying to think straight,
to see through all these blurry images,
to focus on one word, on one voice.
Hands shaking, head pounding, heart beating faster than ever,
everything so unstable, so fragile, so easily lost.
I need something to focus on,
something to hold on to,
something to pull me out of this blur and chaos.
P.S.-
Do you ever feel like this? How did you like this poem? Share your thoughts below!
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Wow Sonali, you described this emotion so well! This piece is truly amazing, I absolutely love it. Masterfully written, my friend 🖤🤗
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Thank you Ace! ♥♥♥
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Awesome piece, Sonali. So heartfelt and raw. Excellent.❤️
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Thanks Grace, really means a lot! ♥♥
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Truly my pleasure.❤️
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The title and the poem as whole is just beautiful. ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you so much, I’m glad you liked it ♥♥
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You’ve poured out so much into this. I can feel every word, every emotion behind this. Loved the piece as well as the title. Power to you ❤️❤️
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Thank you! Your appreciation really means a lot to me ♥♥
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You’re most welcome! Have a lovely day ❤❤
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You too ♥♥
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Raw and powerful, Sonali. You describe human emotion deeply and very well, my dear friend. ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much Jeff! Hope you’re doing well ♥♥
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You’re most welcome, Sonali. Always! I am doing well, and hope you are too! ❤❤
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I am ♥♥
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As time goes by
The fog lifts into the sky
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True that ♥
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The chaos can threaten to close in on us at times. You’ve portrayed it beautifully. Well written, Sonali ❤️
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Thank you so much Shweta! Really appreciate it ♥♥
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There was this paper Digital Signal Processing from Engineering that made me feel like this 😂
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Haha, I can imagine XD
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Oh really? Wow. That was one of my favourite papers 🤣
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Really? I was never fond of circuits and stuff. In 4 years of engineering, I had only 1 backlog and it was this nasty guy! 😂 I had 10 days off for this exam, still I royally messed it up 😀
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Ohhh! It can be tricky.
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Ha ha yeah 😀
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How does it feel messing up an exam, even when you had 10 days off?! XD
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Ugly, more for the bashing I from my dad than for the marks. Thank you for the humiliating question 😂
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So you’re an EC person too!
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Oh no. Computer Science 🙂 We had DSP for CS as well. Poor us. Not everybody is fond of DSP you see 😎
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Ohh I didn’t know it was there for CS too! 🤣 I was an ECE student. DSP was one of our core subjects 😂😂😂
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Oh it was for us 🙂 It was a core subject for most departments unfortunately. It used to be called the Degree Stopping Paper 😂
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Oohhh! Lol that is a well-earned nickname, I guess.
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Indeed it is 😀
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We had Solid State Devices.. SSD that people lovingly called Sure Suppli Devices! And Sonali, sorry for hijacking your comments section!
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Lol. Engineering can be traumatic at times.
Don’t worry about Sonali, she is still a student. . So she understands 🤣 She anyway has a secret lover to keep herself engaged with her romantic poems😉
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Oh yes, it can be traumatic at times. I have written about that – Confessions of an Engineering Student – Parts 1 & 2. Maybe you would like to check it out.
Lol. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I hope that she stays inspired. I love her poems.
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Oh really? I will. I too write a couple about my MBA days. I actually started blogging only during my MBA days 🙂
Oh yes, especially her romantic ones. I was going through many of them two days back 🙂
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*wrote I meant
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Oh that’s great! I will check them out.
Yes, the romantic ones are beautiful. Great job, Sonali!
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Yes, the least we can do for flooding her comments section is butter her a little 😎
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Haha. True! But she deserved every bit of that praise.
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Yes absolutely 😃 I was just kidding. Good she has not blocked us yet 😂
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And you two are really doing a fantastic job at that! XD ♥♥
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😂😂 Absolute pleasure
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You two really made my day XD ♥♥♥
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THANK YOU!! ♥♥
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You are very welcome!
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Don’t worry, I can’t stop laughing at y’all’s conversation! XD
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Haha 😀
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I was very careful not to go near EC or EEE 😂
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Lol! It’s isn’t that bad 😂
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Yes, not too strenuous. I messed it up partly because of the long holidays. I went home, I was at the hostel, and got distracted being home. And in the next sem, had DSP and one more exam on the same day. Fortunately cleared it 🙂
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You are right. Too much of a study break can be a bad thing at times! I am glad that you were able to clear both the exams!
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Yes me too 😀 My placement offer would have gone for a toss otherwise 😉
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Oh yes. That’s the worst part about having pending backlogs! I am glad that you didn’t fall victim to that.
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Yes, it was such a relief once the results came 🙂
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I am sure it was 🙂
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Why, congratulations!!!
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Ha ha. Too late for you to be congratulating me but thank you 🙂 It is still an achievement to clear two exams on a singe day I suppose 😀
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It indeed is! ♥
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I need something to focus on,
something to hold on to,
something to pull me out of this blur and chaos
Beautiful lines. I can relate.
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Thank you. Hope things get better for you soon ♥♥
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Somewhere in our lives, we must have all felt like that. This is really a phenomenal poem, expressing that emotion just perfect! 🙂
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Indeed and yet, we’re sometimes so unkind to other people, while we’re not even aware of their own struggles. Thank you Shruthi, really appreciate it ♥♥
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Very true, sometimes we really do need to put ourselves into other peoples’ shoes and see.
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True that ♥♥
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beautiful piece of work
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Thank you ♥♥
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An excellent metaphor
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Glad you liked it ♥♥
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This reasonates. I sometimes enter this state a couple of times a day..
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I’m sorry you do but you’re stronger than this temporary state. Stay strong ♥♥
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The helplessness so nicely weaved in words
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Thank you ♥♥
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My absolute pleasure
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Marvelous deae
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Thank you ♥♥
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You’re welcome..!
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Dear**
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Relatable! ❤️❤️
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Oh we all feel this hazy emotion many times Sonali. You have described this conundrum so well ❤️
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Thank you! Really means a lot ♥♥
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It’s like being under water not being able to breathe, panic…grief and exhaustion taking over. Eyes opening and closing while colors flashing by when you see a hand reach into the water to pull you up. You grab the hand and inhale fresh air and see the face that pulled you up and that’s your organized chaos. To let the chaos take over for a while just to be able to be immune to the next chaotic episode that occurs isn’t a bad thing. Giving into the weakness to gain strength to see in the future. You penned this perfectly lovely, the perfect strength plus an extra heart can get one through the blur and chaos in life.♥️🌹
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Very wisely said ♥
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Same to you😉♥️
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This was a very beautiful poem, yes, I could definitely relate. Your vivid language and descriptive words really put me in the same place as the speaker in the poem and brought the story to life for me. Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you so much for taking the tie read it. Really appreciate your appreciation ♥♥
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