Someone oblivious of her worth

The epitome of innocence and thoughtfulness she is,

so kind even to those who don’t deserve her at all,

so considerate of others’ feelings and opinions,

so irritating that I hate her sometimes,

so annoying that I wish murder wasn’t a crime.

Not so confident, always doubtful of herself,

never really sure, always changing her mind,

checking, cross checking, over checking every action of herself,

constantly avoiding, not acknowledging that she’s beautiful.

Took care of me when I was sick,

tried to comfort me when I was heartbroken,

stayed up all night to help me with my assignments,

listened to me when I felt like my voice didn’t matter.

My own arrogance and ego never let me confess

how much she actually means to me,

how much I’m thankful to have met her,

how much blessed I am to have her as my first roommate.

P.S.-

This is for the person who deserves all the goodness that exists in this world.

69 Comments Add yours

  1. Fantastic piece, Sonali. I love how you included so many different emotions. Well done as always.❤️

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  2. Ace says:

    Awww this is so beautiful and heartfelt! So many layers of care and love here, it’s lovely to read!! Such a graceful flow, as always!!! Keep shining, Sonali! You writing is always spectacular 🖤🤗

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you Ace! And you’re always kind to me♥

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  3. AB says:

    It’s a blessing to have such a wonderful person by your side. I loved the line “checking, cross checking, over checking every action”. You present emotions in a really exceptional way. Loved it, one for the heart ❤️❤️

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you so much! I’m quite partial to that line myself XD Have a blessed day ♥♥

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      1. AB says:

        You’re most welcome! You have a lovely day too ❤❤

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  4. vaniheart says:

    You are blessed to have a such a wonderful soul around you ❤❤

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    1. Sonali says:

      Indeed I am♥ Thank you for reading ♥♥

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  5. Wow, what an amazing person, you so lucky to have her!

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    1. Sonali says:

      True that♥

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  6. ivor20 says:

    “Friendship is the hardest thing in the world to explain. It’s not something you learn in school. But if you haven’t learned the meaning of friendship, you really haven’t learned anything.” — Muhammad Ali

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    1. Sonali says:

      That’s a very beautiful quote Ivor. Thanks for sharing ♥♥

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  7. PauliAtomic says:

    Aww! Sounds like a complex and beautiful relationship. Roommates are so tough– definitely a stroke of good luck to live with someone kind 🥰

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  8. What a beautiful dedication. Lucky you both are

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you and indeed ♥♥

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you! ♥♥

      Like

  9. Kritika says:

    Some people are the ones for you and forever. Lovely heartily written piece.

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you! Your appreciation really means a lot ♥♥

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Kritika says:

        My pleasure 🙂

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  10. Lovely. I thought it must have been about your sister while reading it, but roommate! I never liked having roommates 😂

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    1. Sonali says:

      I never liked the idea of having roommates either, but this girl was amazing. She’s the best roommate you can ever ask for. Thanks for commenting ♥♥

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      1. Ah, you got lucky 😀 Welcome 🙂

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      2. Sonali says:

        That’s true XD

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  11. Manoj Mehra says:

    Touching post. It’s a blessing to have such a person in life who cares for you and stands by you in every situation. Such people are very rare who don’t leave you even if you don’t treat them the way they treat you. Never lose such a person.

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you and indeed, they’re worth holding on to forever ♥♥

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  12. Journalofthegrey says:

    This is so sad. But also shows a strong and determined young lady.

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    1. Sonali says:

      Indeed she is. Thanks for taking the time to read it ♥♥

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      1. Journalofthegrey says:

        It was an awesome read. You’re welcome!

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      2. Sonali says:

        Stay gorgeous ♥♥

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      3. Journalofthegrey says:

        Lol! I’m not gorgeous but thank you! 🙂

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  13. Beautiful piece ❤️

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you ♥♥

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  14. Era says:

    Beautifully penned 💙
    It’s always a blessing to have someone like that in your life 😊

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you and true that ♥♥

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    1. Sonali says:

      I’m glad you did! ♥♥

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  15. Lovely!!❤❤ I hope she reads this 😄

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    1. Sonali says:

      She did and thank God, she loved it! XD

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      1. Aww that’s sweet

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  16. Rupali says:

    You are blessed indeed.

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  17. Filarance says:

    Heart touching poem..!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you ♥

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Filarance says:

        You’re very welcome dear Sonali..!

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  18. Jeff Flesch says:

    A beautiful tribute, full of love. Lovely, Sonali.❤️❤️

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you! ♥♥

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      1. Jeff Flesch says:

        You’re most welcome, always. ❤❤

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you♥♥

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      1. Always a joy and pleasure to read and share your posts with followers, My Dear! Hope you have a great day!! xoxox 😘💕🎁🌹

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  19. Jokerswild says:

    It’s a well known fact that sometimes people look in the mirror and don’t like what they see. Oft times we see someone with humor, qualities or character like ours and get annoyed because we say, that reminds me of me! Your roommate seems kind hearted, humble and caring. Hmmm, reminds me of….ahh, never mind but she is equally amazing.😉. And that means this person is very lucky to have this roommate in her life because they seem one in the same. A beautiful tribute to a person who seems oblivious of her worth, but you make her know how much she is worth.🌹

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you thank you thank you so so so so so much!!!!! ♥♥♥

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Jokerswild says:

        ♥️♥️🌹

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  20. inner core of your feelings and experience shared.

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you ♥♥

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  21. Talkthirtea says:

    This is just beautiful! Keep that person in your life forever 😊

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you and I’ll try to ♥♥

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  22. HappySoul says:

    Sweet dedication Sonali ❤️

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you! ♥♥

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  23. Beautiful poem❤️

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you ♥♥

      Liked by 1 person

      1. 💐🌹❤️💐🌹❤️🍫🤗

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