Fall and Crash

on

I keep on waiting,

hurting,

and yet, you never come.

You’ve pushed me

so far to the edge,

that I’m about to fall

and crash…

And there’s nothing

that you or I ,

can do about it.

P.S.-

What did this poem make you feel like? Did you like it? Share your thoughts below!

11 Comments Add yours

  1. Sidharth says:

    I loved the beauty with which you gloriously balanced the emotions through your words. Based on my personal experience, it made me realise that one should “be in love” but never “fall in love” because the sometimes things tend to ultimately break when they fall. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem. According to your convenience please do read some of my writings would love to know what you think about them.

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    1. Sonali says:

      I’m glad that you like my poem. Thank you for your kind words. They’re appreciated.
      I’ll be sure to check them out soon. 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Sidharth says:

        Thank you for respecting my request, feel free to to read them whenever you can / feel like🙏

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Sonali says:

        Of course 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

  2. cpluzc says:

    The combi picture/poem is what I like. Viewing a picture and feeling what it does to me. Your poem fits the picture.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sonali says:

      I’m glad that you could feel the picture. Thank you 🙂

      Like

  3. Jokerswild says:

    Balancing on that preverbal cliff with the outstretched hand waiting for one to grab and pull you up. You feel as if you’re waiting for something that’ll never come, but in my opinion that rope already came lovely. “Balance”. The balance you are showing is strength that you are moving on and it’s a sign that someone is already there whether you know it or not. The fall is the journey, the crash is the new beginning of a trip.
    The way you wrote this signifying that there’s nothing neither party could do was the peaceful walk away letting the reader know the book will go on because the writer is strong enough to keep going. She was pushed, but she never really fell off the cliff.❤️

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    1. Sonali says:

      You have such a good heart Roy… and it’s filled with love and positivity. Thank you so much for being here in my comment section. It’s a great, great pleasure to have you here. You can’t even begin to imagine how much your comments mean to me. Thank you 🙂

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      1. Jokerswild says:

        I can easily say the same about you and a whole lot more lovely🌹. Your words, your heart and pure passion is a breath of fresh air. Stay you and stay true.❤️

        Liked by 1 person

      2. Sonali says:

        Well that’s really nice of you 🙂 Thank you Roy and you too.

        Liked by 1 person

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