How I Feel

I feel drained

as if I’m empty.

I feel like I’m guilty

of something that I’m not even aware of.

I feel like I’m going to fade away

and there’ll be no one to even notice.

I feel like my head will explode

with all this turmoil that it carries.

I feel like my heart will drown

in this ocean of guilt.

I feel like I’m on the verge of a break down

which is going to shatter me like never before.

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What did you think of this poem? Do you ever feel like this too? Share below!

27 Comments Add yours

  1. Manoj Mehra says:

    Often I feel like this but you have to be strong.

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    1. Sonali says:

      I know, thanks.

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  2. I feel this way a lot of the times. I just have to understand that those feelings will come and go.

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    1. Sonali says:

      Oh I’m sorry that you feel this way. Hope you feel better soon.

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  3. Count me as a me too. I remember feeling this way as a child. I did learn to channel this feeling from a negative one, into one of action. i.e. turning depression into a positive. I am still prone to dark feelings which feed my darker stories. One could argue that is turning a negative into a positive until you read the stories. I am not afraid of darker poems or stories. Yours tells me, you should not be either. i.e. that is a positive. 🙂

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    1. Sonali says:

      I can relate to that. Well, I’d like to think that there is something positive coming out of all this.

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  4. Samyak Singh says:

    Takes a lot to sink in with positivity..stay strong🤜🤛

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    1. Sonali says:

      Indeed. Thanks 🙂

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  5. Jokerswild says:

    You only feel this way because you have a heart lovely, it’s part of being human.❤️. But you can’t carry everyone else’s guilt, it’s the kind of people we are, you help others because you care and that’s just how you are, and that’s one of your beautiful strengths. But don’t feel guilty about letting others have their day in court for themselves lovely, people will make you feel low only to try and lift themselves up but remember you are the sun and for every one person you leave in the shade, you shine on a million. You can’t fade without being noticed and this is how I feel.😉

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    1. Sunny mahesh says:

      Nazre utha Kar jinna sikho, pachtawe Ka samdar itna bhi gehra Nahi hotaa, haaa thode tuffaan atte hai pr issi se to sambhlne Ka mokka milta hai.

      Zindagi jinaa aur Zindagi bitana , dono me kafii fark hotta hai. Life hamara compititer hai usee Esse logo se compition krne me Maza Nahi ataa.. areee Zindagi hai . Koi mazakk thodii hai……………..
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      Woo kehte hai na English me. “People changes,but dreams don’t”

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      1. Sonali says:

        Nahi ho pata mujhse ab…

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    2. Sonali says:

      Thank you so much Roy. Coming back here and finding this comment lying in my notifications really did make me feel better about myself. And yes, I agree with you, like always.

      Hope you’ve been well.

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      1. Jokerswild says:

        You are sooo welcome lovely and I missed you so much.🌹❤️. Always feel better about yourself because you’re better than that.😊. And you can agree with that too.😉

        I hope everything is well and good with you.🌹

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      2. Sonali says:

        🙂
        I’ve been better, thank you.

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      3. Jokerswild says:

        Better than average and like yourself make life more beautiful than better.❤️. Remember that everyday and that’s how things can stay. I’m here for you, remember….I feel ya.😉🌹

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      4. Sonali says:

        Thank you and yes, I’ll always remember that 😊🌹

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      5. Jokerswild says:

        You’re so welcome lovely. And yes, always remember that.❤️🌹

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  6. sana khalid says:

    This is relatable and nicely written

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  7. Aman Thakur says:

    Yeah! Sometimes I feel like that.

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    1. Sonali says:

      Hope you feel better soon.

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    1. Sonali says:

      That’s all I’ve been doing for a while now.

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  8. around&about says:

    Very powerful poem. I sure do feel like that sometimes. Keep it up! Love, Stefanie

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you Stefanie!

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