You hear that sound?
That sound of something breaking?
I myself didn’t know what it was
but now that my tears have run dry
and my heart has gone numb,
I know exactly what it was that broke.
Hope.
That little hope that grew
deep inside my heart,
amidst all the insecurities and self doubt,
in spite of the darkness that I was within.
That hope of getting better.
That hope of being loved.
It’s all shattered now.
I have no hope left in me anymore.
P.S.-
What did you think of this poem? Did you relate to it? Have any other thoughts? Comment below!
Maybe we can say dis as modern love story 💔
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I wrote it imagining a mother-daughter relationship which never went right for either of them.
But I think you can say that this is a modern love story.
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Yeah coz from both side hopes got scattered and dis only happens in dis modern time as that gap !!
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Yeah, that’s true. It doesn’t take much time for one’s hope to get shattered to ruins.
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Yeah actually !! And dats bitter to digest
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It indeed is.
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Have a lovely day ahead !! (•‿•)
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You too 😊
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Love it 😍 & can relate for sure…
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Thanks and I’m sorry. Hope it gets better for you.
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It was before tho…in my younger age 🙂 but still can relate
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Oh well, that’s great that you grew out of that situation so beautifully. Congrats to you!
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💙💙
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Yes this happens with everyone at some point of the life. It’s just a phase that passes for sure.
There’s always hope no matter what. It’s never lost, forever 💙
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Yeah, that’s true. Thank you for your kind read Abhishek 😊
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You’re welcome 🌸
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You wrote it beautifully – but hey bring that hope back again 🌸🌸
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Thanks and I wish it was that easy.
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It will come dear. Never lose hope 💕💕
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I’ll try and thank you Shantanu 😊
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Stay charming. Universe has always a plan for everyone. And remember good things happen to good people. You are a good soul. Keep the believe strong 💕
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Thank you Shantanu. Your appreciation means a lot to me. You’re really sweet and thank you for all the support that you offer to me and my blog. Thank you so much!
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You are very welcome 🌸🌸
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Lovely.i loved this poem.
Sometimes being hopeless gives you another way to cheer yourself up and just move onn
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That’s a positive way to look at it. Thanks for commenting 😊
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Sometimes all breaking sounds aren’t bad lovely. It says a heart must first be broken in order to be opened, and that’s where hope comes from…inside the heart. When you write, Hope is never shattered lovely.🌹
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You know sometimes, you say some things which I never thought of. And then after reading your comment, I automatically agree with everything that you say. You write so beautifully that I just can’t help but agree with you. You’re just awesome 🌹🌹🌹
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Agree with me when I say you are beautiful just like the words you write.🌹. My comments come from the beautiful words written which comes from you, so that makes you awesome. A million thanks for your lovely words.🌹🌹
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Thank you Roy. You’re really sweet. You’re welcome 😊🌹
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😊❤️🌹
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I really hope you get your hope back as being hopeless is something quite dreadful dear…
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Yeah I know. By the way, I’m better now. Thank you for reaching out. It really means a lot 😊
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The world can become a really wonderful place if we all can reach out to one another, isn’t it??
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Indeed. The world would really be a better place then.
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Absolutely dear😊😊
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Of course I can relate.
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I’m sorry that you had to go through something as terrible as this.
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