Sometimes, I just want to cave in
and I don’t want to face the world.
Sometimes, I just want to scream
and I don’t want anyone to hear.
The whole world, ever ready to
knock me down every time I get up.
Tears stream down my red cheeks
and there’s no one to see, or care.
I feel so vulnerable, so insecure,
like I’m standing naked in front of a crowd.
I don’t know why I do this, why I crumble down
like I’m nothing, like I don’t matter.
I won’t say this out loud and you know it
but please, understand that I need you.
Please hold me while I try and get a hold of myself,
Please just don’t leave me alone…
P.S.-
Have you ever felt like your whole world is falling apart and there’s nothing that you can do? Have you ever felt the need of having someone to hold you while you break down? Comment below!
To be honest – Never. But I’m sure the feeling isn’t the greatest!
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Well good for you and yeah, it’s not a really good feeling.
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Moments like these can be very difficult. Often, we need the company of support of someone close to help us through. Lovely write. The emotions came through
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True. Thank you Andrew. 😊 It’s lovely to hear from you again 🌹🌹🌹
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We all have our ups and lows – see how can bail out with your determination, grit and beautiful poetry
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Thank you 😊
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You are welcome
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We all have our days when it feels like things are falling apart but on the hindside it’s the beginning of a new dawn
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That’s a positive way to look at this. Thanks for commenting 😊
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My pleasure 😊
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Masterpiece!
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Thank you!
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To feel naked is to feel free lovely and anyone who has an imagination has felt low before, because they use their imagination to escape reality to get away from feeling low. That’s how one ventures out of their mind, and it’s not a bad thing. We escape by writing, talking or with a little help from unsuspecting places and a little strength.🌹🌹
Your beauty and strength sees you through and your writing does wonders, not only for you but for other readers too. A lovely write indeed, out of mind is just a temporary brain freeze.😉
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Your comments never fail in blowing my mind away. You’ve left me speechless. The way that you understand what I write, and then make it your own and write it down so gracefully is just amazing Roy.
I’ve got to say. I’ve met many wonderful writers here but you my friend, are not only a wonderful writer, but also an amazing reader.
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And you never cease to amaze me with your mind reading work lovely, how relatable it is to others and how heartfelt and personalized you make it is beautiful.
Treasures are a treat to find and when you come across a gem, that’s something wonderful.🌹. You are mind blowing my friend.😊
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Thank you Roy. You really can’t imagine how much your opinion matters to me. As a matter of fact, every time that I post something, I always wait for your comment because I know, that it’ll be the best interpretation of my poem.
Thank you Roy and so are you 😊💕
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Your post are a treat to read as well, I appreciate what you put into them, how you make them relatable and the message. Thank you so much for respecting my opinions, you make me happy and I am very humbled🌹
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Thank you for your continuous support Roy. And you make me happy too 😊🌹
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❤️🌹😊
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Ohh I feel this! Very good!:)
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I’m glad you liked it 🙂
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I really did!:)
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