What we have

It’s been a year
since we met.
Here’s to more.

I close my eyes, hoping
that you’ll be here
when I open them,
but you’re not.

So many plans we have
for the day when we’ll be
right in front of each other,
for the very first time.

We used to stay up late
just so that we could talk.
Kept making plans all night long
for the day when we’ll meet.

A year it’s been.
There’s more to go
before we can
see each other.

An immense amount of patience
our relationship requires.
Time tries to separate us,
but fails so pathetically.

There’s no label for
what we have.
So pure and innocent it is
what we have.

 

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  1. Nirant Gurav says:

    This piece is relatable to me .
    It’s almost a 2 months now that we are out of talk , but now
    What I’ve is her memories & just waiting for her to come back and get things normal .
    All same stuff was happening between us as u wrote in ur poem .
    So dear ….
    U penned it amazingly beautiful 🙇

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    1. Sonali says:

      I’m so sorry to hear that Nirant. I hope it gets better for both of you. I hope she comes back if that’s what’s best and if not, then, I hope that you make peace with her memories.

      Thank you so much Nirant. I’m glad you liked it 😊

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      1. Nirant Gurav says:

        Thank you so much for your words !! & Have a good day ahed !! ☺️

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      2. Sonali says:

        You’re welcome and you too 😊

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  2. Jokerswild says:

    Beautiful piece lovely, and I love the last verse especially. But the patience in love that this poem portrays is gorgeous. Time can never take away true feelings for someone, if they’re worth the fight then they’re worth the prize. Beautiful.🌹🌹. Late but worth the wait.❤️

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you so much Roy.

      “Time can never take away true feelings for someone, if they’re worth the fight then they’re worth the prize.” Well said Roy 👍

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      1. Jokerswild says:

        Time can’t take away true feelings beautiful😏❤️. No matter what🌹. You are so very welcome, I loved this piece.
        And I missed you.💕. Hope you’ve been well.🌹

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      2. Sonali says:

        That’s true and, thanks.
        I missed you too Roy. And I’ve been good. Just busy with studies. Hope you’ve been well too.

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      3. Jokerswild says:

        😊. That’s good, keep it up beautiful🌹
        And yes, I’ve been good also. Good to see your lovely writing again.🌹🌹

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      4. Sonali says:

        Will sure do 😊
        Thanks 🌹

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      5. Jokerswild says:

        I know you will, I feel ya.😉
        You’re so welcome 🌹🙃

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  3. This was so beautiful and relatable Sonali

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you Andrew. It’s always nice to hear from you. Hope you’ve been well.

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  4. The yearnings of a unrequited love beautifully expressed

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you 😊

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  5. beautifully expressed

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you 🙂

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