It’s been a year
since we met.
Here’s to more.
I close my eyes, hoping
that you’ll be here
when I open them,
but you’re not.
So many plans we have
for the day when we’ll be
right in front of each other,
for the very first time.
We used to stay up late
just so that we could talk.
Kept making plans all night long
for the day when we’ll meet.
A year it’s been.
There’s more to go
before we can
see each other.
An immense amount of patience
our relationship requires.
Time tries to separate us,
but fails so pathetically.
There’s no label for
what we have.
So pure and innocent it is
what we have.
P.S.-
What did you think of this poem? Did it remind you of someone? Comment below!
This piece is relatable to me .
It’s almost a 2 months now that we are out of talk , but now
What I’ve is her memories & just waiting for her to come back and get things normal .
All same stuff was happening between us as u wrote in ur poem .
So dear ….
U penned it amazingly beautiful 🙇
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I’m so sorry to hear that Nirant. I hope it gets better for both of you. I hope she comes back if that’s what’s best and if not, then, I hope that you make peace with her memories.
Thank you so much Nirant. I’m glad you liked it 😊
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Thank you so much for your words !! & Have a good day ahed !! ☺️
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You’re welcome and you too 😊
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Beautiful piece lovely, and I love the last verse especially. But the patience in love that this poem portrays is gorgeous. Time can never take away true feelings for someone, if they’re worth the fight then they’re worth the prize. Beautiful.🌹🌹. Late but worth the wait.❤️
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Thank you so much Roy.
“Time can never take away true feelings for someone, if they’re worth the fight then they’re worth the prize.” Well said Roy 👍
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Time can’t take away true feelings beautiful😏❤️. No matter what🌹. You are so very welcome, I loved this piece.
And I missed you.💕. Hope you’ve been well.🌹
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That’s true and, thanks.
I missed you too Roy. And I’ve been good. Just busy with studies. Hope you’ve been well too.
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😊. That’s good, keep it up beautiful🌹
And yes, I’ve been good also. Good to see your lovely writing again.🌹🌹
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Will sure do 😊
Thanks 🌹
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I know you will, I feel ya.😉
You’re so welcome 🌹🙃
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This was so beautiful and relatable Sonali
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Thank you Andrew. It’s always nice to hear from you. Hope you’ve been well.
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The yearnings of a unrequited love beautifully expressed
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Thank you 😊
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My pleasure
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beautifully expressed
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Thank you 🙂
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my pleasure
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