Was it my mistake?

What happened to us? Was it my mistake?

 

So close we were just a few months before,
and look at what we’ve become now.
We said that we would never change,
together we promised to stay, always.

 

What happened to us? Was it my mistake?

 

Loads of ego there is in both of us;
not ready to bend, either of us.
Days pass by and I still wait for you to call;
I wonder, “Do you wait for me too?”

 

What happened to us? Was it my mistake?

 

People ask me about you, how you’ve been;
“We don’t talk anymore,” is all I say.
For what else can I say now?
Is there even anything left of us?

 

What happened to us? Was it my mistake?

 

Anything I’d do now to get back
again; what we once had.
Everything we’ve been through
still makes me wonder-

 

What happened to us? Was it my mistake?

 

 

P.S.-

Let me know what you think of this poem through the comments below.

 

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37 Comments Add yours

  1. Beutiflee says:

    There’s no mistake. If it wasn’t meant to be, it’s hard so let it go. Very good poem

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    1. Sonali says:

      I guess you’re right. Thanks.

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Jokerswild says:

    Lovely words written from the heart once again lovely, I felt every word. Blame can never be a one way road. You should read my post called “It’s Not You”, it goes perfect with this. Seems we’re connected in writing, like I said, I feel you. I love the emotion you put in your pen, and no it wasn’t on you.🌹
    You’ve been missed❤️

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you Roy. You always manage to light me up by your words. And I read your post. It was absolutely amazing. Thanks for your kind words.

      You’ve been missed too.💕

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      1. Jokerswild says:

        I should thank you lovely, you do the same. You brighten days as well. Your post is just as heart touching as the one you read, they go together, kinda strange.😊. Thank you for liking it and thank you for your wonderful return❤️🌹.
        ❤️❤️

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      2. Sonali says:

        I’m glad I could do so. You’re welcome.

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      3. Jokerswild says:

        ❤️❤️🌹. You’re wonderful.

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      4. Sonali says:

        And you’re sweet.

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      5. Jokerswild says:

        Not as sweet as you.😊

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  3. Nirant Gurav says:

    Hey hi !! After long time mate!!
    Beautiful play of words Sonali , I feel each & every words …
    “We don’t talk anymore 🙇”.

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    1. Sonali says:

      Hi and yeah, got busy with studies.
      Thank you so much Nirant. I really appreciate your encouraging words.

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      1. Nirant Gurav says:

        Pleasure always for beautiful stuff like dis 🎀

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      2. Sonali says:

        That’s really sweet of you 😊

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  4. mystery262000 says:

    Madam ye hai kiske liye? Abhinav ke liye?

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    1. Sonali says:

      Uske liye kyu hoga?

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  5. mystery262000 says:

    Sach bolna… Ye mere liye hai kya?

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    1. Sonali says:

      Isme bhi puchne ka zarorat pad rha hai tumko

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  6. mystery262000 says:

    Sunn agr ye mere liye hai to, mere side se abhi bhi kuch nhii bdla hai. Tere call ka wait hr roz krte hain. Shabnam se baat hota hai jb bhi tere bare me jaroor puchte hain. Tumko to koi mtlb nhii hmse. Number bhi delete kr di hai mera haddi!!

    Agr baat krne ka mnn ho kbhi to 7488354788 is number pe contact krna.

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    1. Sonali says:

      Nahi kiye hai Tera number delete. Moti tu ki hai mera number delete.

      Ha aur tumko to sharm ata hai na call krne me.

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  7. mystery262000 says:

    Aur ek baat! Ego ka to bolo mt. April se leke friendship day tk hum hr roz try kiye tumhare saath contact me rhne ka. Emails kr hi dete bich bich me but tum ji kbhi nhii try ki mere bare me janne ka ya kuch bhi. ( judge nhii kr rhe tumko) Sorry bura lga ho to.

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    1. Sonali says:

      Lekin hm judge karenge tumko. Tu hi Mana ki thi call krne se. Tum hi to tadap Rahi thi dur Jane ke liye. To jao Apne UV ke pas.

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  8. It looks You are blamed though there is no mistake from you side.Well described..But what about the other side version ?just joking… wonderful poetry.Loved reading it.Thank you Sonali

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    1. Sonali says:

      The one on the other side is stupidly crazy.
      Thank you for your kind words 😊

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  9. A beautiful poem. Sometimes priority changes and sometimes the betrayal love

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you and yeah, sometimes, it does happen.

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  10. Reblogged this on Success Inspirers' World and commented:
    Lovely poem.

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thanks for the reblog 😊💕

      Like

  11. Such an amazingly described the situation….just WOW!!

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