My First Love

 

You were there when I

first opened my eyes;

You were there when I

took my first step.

 

You’re always the one

who never stops bragging

about even my smallest

of achievements.

 

You inspire me like

no one else ever has.

Your life gives me the hope

like no on else’s ever has.

 

You’re the only one

who laughs at my stupid jokes,

pushes me to be better

when all I want is to give up.

 

You always pick me up,

when I fall down; and sometimes,

you make me fall

only to help me rise higher.

 

I still hate you though

for not listening to me

when I say what you should

or shouldn’t do.

 

I love our fights,

the way we annoy Mom,

the way we prank everyone,

together, you and me.

 

I’m sorry for all the times

when I get stubborn

and don’t listen to anyone,

but hey, I get that from you.

 

You taught me how to

be confident of myself.

You make me see the light

even in the dark.

 

You fought against all odds,

faced so many challenges

and always won all of them,

like a hero which you are.

 

You’re the first man that

I fell in love with.

You’ll always be the king

who will rule my heart.

 

My strength, comfort

lies in you.

You’re my pride;

My first love.

 

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25 Comments Add yours

  1. Nirant Gurav says:

    Wow ,sweet & smile & u just nailed it on dis topic ,very very well written πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™Œ

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thanks πŸ˜ŠπŸ’•

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Nirant Gurav says:

        Pleasure always πŸ˜‰πŸŽ€

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Perfect description of love / great post

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Sonali says:

      Thanks 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Jokerswild says:

    A wonderful tribute to the first man in your life lovely, this was an awesome post and really heartfelt!! Loved it, you are a sweetheart.🌹🌹

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Sonali says:

      Thanks Roy.😊 And the first man in my life deserves way more than just this.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Jokerswild says:

        Your love and adoration is all your father can wish for, and you seem to give him that. You’re a beautiful soul.

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      2. Sonali says:

        I hope so. Thanks 😊

        Liked by 1 person

  4. mystery262000 says:

    Wow Sonali! A very beautiful poem for your king of heart, your father. He will be proud of you and he Is proud of you. There’s just a tiny error which I noticed. Recheck the spelling of challenges in your poem. Other than that, a great piece to read and to dedicate to your father.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you for the compliment and for pointing out the error. I corrected it. 😊

      Like

  5. Perfect Sonali. Love this tribute.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Sonali says:

      Thanks Andrew πŸ™‚

      Liked by 1 person

  6. a lovely ode to your father sonali…..

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sonali says:

      Thanks 😊

      Like

    1. Sonali says:

      Thanks so much πŸ˜ŠπŸ’•

      Liked by 1 person

  7. iScriblr says:

    Beautiful!❀

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you πŸ˜ŠπŸ’•

      Liked by 1 person

  8. Wow…. Its so very lovely…

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  9. Riman Ray says:

    Beautifully written
    Keep up the work dear

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you 😊

      Like

      1. Riman Ray says:

        You’re most welcome

        Liked by 1 person

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