Trying to get you back

 

You and me,

will we ever be?

 

Are we

even meant to be?

 

So many lies,

rumors and scandals,

dusts what we have.

 

We try again and again

to get back

what we once had.

 

But all in vain;

All we had

is lost now.

 

Is it too soon

or is it too late

to redeem ourselves?

 

 

One more chance,

that’s all we ask for,

that’s all we need.

 

Just one more time

we let ourselves feel

the love that we hide.

 

The undeniably visible

love, that we have

between us.

 

 

P.S.-

On a scale of 1-10, how would you rate this poem?

Let me know what you think of this poem through the comments.

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18 Comments Add yours

  1. Rêveuse says:

    Wow u nailed it ❤️ ,always constant with your words 💐

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thanks 😊💕

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  2. Ravisingh says:

    I rate it more than 10!
    You hv nailed it.Loved it sonali!

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you so much 😊💕

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Jokerswild says:

    The emotion is there and it definitely matches the title, I felt the feeling and I was able to put myself into the readers place. This came from the heart so it had power and I enjoyed the flow. I liked the message of love, trying to work it out but was it worth it so another emotional hit also. I’ll rate this a 10 but I’m not sure if the middle line was “the love we hide” or was it supposed to be “the love we had.” Either way, if it is hide, then I see the significance in the statement. Their love is somewhat lost and they are looking for it, ahh, that’s clever.

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    1. Sonali says:

      Thank you so much you awesome man. It’s always a pleasure to hear from you. And yeah, it is meant to be “hide”. You got it right. 🙂

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      1. Jokerswild says:

        You’re so welcome lovely, you’re the awesome one and believe me, the pleasure is all mines.😉. Ahh, so it’s meant to be hide, we think alike❤️!! I felt it. You are something special.🌹

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      2. Sonali says:

        If you say so, I believe you. We sure do, maybe that’s why you always get the meaning of my poems. Awww, thanks. You are too.

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      3. Jokerswild says:

        You should believe me because I wouldn’t lie to you, no reason to.😉. Yeah, that’s probably why I get your poems, I read between the lines and we think alike, but that’s “just me”😉🌹
        Like I said, I’m just following your awesomeness.❤️

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      4. Sonali says:

        I know😊. I’m sure you’re more than just yourself 😇
        That’s really sweet of you to say 😊💕🌹

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      5. Jokerswild says:

        😉. I’m just me, but you’re more. 😇
        You have a good soul, you’re a sweetheart. 🌹❤️

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      6. Sonali says:

        I think we’re both more than what we think of ourselves 😉.
        So are you 😊💕

        Liked by 1 person

      7. Jokerswild says:

        I’ll agree with you😉
        🌹❤️🌹. You’re a bigger one❤️😉

        Liked by 1 person

      8. Sonali says:

        Perfect 😊💕
        I doubt that 🌹💕

        Liked by 1 person

      9. Jokerswild says:

        Yes you are😉❤️
        And I don’t doubt 🌹❤️

        Liked by 1 person

      10. Sonali says:

        Thanks 😊💕🌹

        Liked by 1 person

      11. Jokerswild says:

        Welcome 😊❤️🌹

        Liked by 1 person

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