You and me,
will we ever be?
Are we
even meant to be?
So many lies,
rumors and scandals,
dusts what we have.
We try again and again
to get back
what we once had.
But all in vain;
All we had
is lost now.
Is it too soon
or is it too late
to redeem ourselves?
One more chance,
that’s all we ask for,
that’s all we need.
Just one more time
we let ourselves feel
the love that we hide.
The undeniably visible
love, that we have
between us.
P.S.-
On a scale of 1-10, how would you rate this poem?
Let me know what you think of this poem through the comments.
Wow u nailed it ❤️ ,always constant with your words 💐
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Thanks 😊💕
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I rate it more than 10!
You hv nailed it.Loved it sonali!
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Thank you so much 😊💕
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The emotion is there and it definitely matches the title, I felt the feeling and I was able to put myself into the readers place. This came from the heart so it had power and I enjoyed the flow. I liked the message of love, trying to work it out but was it worth it so another emotional hit also. I’ll rate this a 10 but I’m not sure if the middle line was “the love we hide” or was it supposed to be “the love we had.” Either way, if it is hide, then I see the significance in the statement. Their love is somewhat lost and they are looking for it, ahh, that’s clever.
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Thank you so much you awesome man. It’s always a pleasure to hear from you. And yeah, it is meant to be “hide”. You got it right. 🙂
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You’re so welcome lovely, you’re the awesome one and believe me, the pleasure is all mines.😉. Ahh, so it’s meant to be hide, we think alike❤️!! I felt it. You are something special.🌹
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If you say so, I believe you. We sure do, maybe that’s why you always get the meaning of my poems. Awww, thanks. You are too.
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You should believe me because I wouldn’t lie to you, no reason to.😉. Yeah, that’s probably why I get your poems, I read between the lines and we think alike, but that’s “just me”😉🌹
Like I said, I’m just following your awesomeness.❤️
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I know😊. I’m sure you’re more than just yourself 😇
That’s really sweet of you to say 😊💕🌹
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😉. I’m just me, but you’re more. 😇
You have a good soul, you’re a sweetheart. 🌹❤️
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I think we’re both more than what we think of ourselves 😉.
So are you 😊💕
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I’ll agree with you😉
🌹❤️🌹. You’re a bigger one❤️😉
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Perfect 😊💕
I doubt that 🌹💕
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Yes you are😉❤️
And I don’t doubt 🌹❤️
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Thanks 😊💕🌹
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Welcome 😊❤️🌹
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